Penname: lilyvonschtup [Contact]
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Member Since: 09 Jul 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:I'm so grateful that people have enjoyed my stories so far; after having considered myself relegated to the realm of analytical writing, it was an unexpected joy to be able to write fiction again. Finding that people actually liked what I wrote was more than I'd hoped for.

I have a dual BA in Poli Sci and Writing, and live in the damp, cold Northwest with my fiancee and two birds.

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Reviews by lilyvonschtup

Summary: ((Sequel to "WHAT YOU WANT")) -- Some things are less unconditional than others.

Categories: CSI - Threesomes or Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: Gil Grissom, Greg Sanders, Nick Stokes
Genres: Angst, Drama, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 11 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 45726; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Mar 2005; Published: 18 Mar 2005

Reviewer: lilyvonschtup (Signed)
11 Feb 2007

Hey -- would you stop apologizing for the length of your stories? I like them that way. I can sit back and relax and actually get into a story line this way. Not that I don't tend to take at least twenty pages just to clear my throat... Take care and I always look forward to reading (or re-reading) your stuff.
Chapter 1: first

Summary: What does Greg Sanders really want? For that matter, what do Nick, Warrick, and Gil really want as well?

Categories: CSI - Threesomes or Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: Gil Grissom, Greg Sanders, Nick Stokes, Warrick Brown
Genres: Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4756; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Apr 2005; Published: 13 Apr 2005

Reviewer: lilyvonschtup (Signed)
14 Feb 2008

I love your quotes -- complete with attributes! This is excellent; switching voices, managing the whole geometry of the situation, the whole thing.
Chapter 1: What Greg Sanders Really Wants

Summary: “Ecstasy, nightmare, sleep in a nest of flames.”—“A Season in Hell”, Arthur Rimbaud.

Updated: 06 Apr 2007; Published: 10 Apr 2006

Reviewer: lilyvonschtup (Signed)
12 Jul 2006

Awesome, awesome, awesome. I have barely been able to put it down. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and the awesome comment. I will keep it up if you keep reading. :)
Chapter 1: Ch. 1

Reviewer: lilyvonschtup (Signed)
01 Aug 2006

You had better bloody well follow this up! This has been awesome, and I can't wait to see where it goes from where it ended. This is the first in my "favorite stories" section.

Author's Response: I will follow this up. I'm already writing the sequel, I've got chapter 1 done already, BUT, I want to wait until I have it almost completed before I post any of it. Also, I'm so excited that my story is your first Favorite Story, that's awesome!
Chapter 25: Ch. 25

Reviewer: lilyvonschtup (Signed)
09 Dec 2006

Hey! I'm loving this story -- keep it coming...I can't wait to find out what happens. You have a serious gift for cliff hanger chapters, darn it all!

Author's Response: Yes, cliffhangers are fun to write, plus it keeps the readers coming back for more and more...I enjoy writing them. Thanks for the review!
Chapter 34: Illuminations: Chapter Nine

Reviewer: lilyvonschtup (Signed)
09 Dec 2006

Hey -- what's with the lack of reviews here? You definitely deserve more. You've obviously put a lot of work into this, and I recognize and appreciate your efforts. You've got a tightly written piece of art here.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review again! I'm fine with the lack of comments...for the most part. I think the fact that I kind of slowed down my updating was cause of least I hope it was and not the writing. I've been extremely busy finishing up my final semester of college and my internship that I forget to post my chapters, but I'm finally finished and now have a lot of free time on my hands until I find a real job, lol. So, expect more frequent updates.
Chapter 2: Ch. 2

Reviewer: lilyvonschtup (Signed)
09 Dec 2006

Sorry for double post -- but I do have one question. What kind of research did you get into in order to write Grissom the way you did? It's really fascinating, and very vivid. Great work.

Author's Response: Double posts are fine, it proves you're interested. And my research, I read a lot. I research EVERYTHING before I post my chapters. That is also why it takes so long for me to update. I usually write my chapter just straight through then I go back and research information and review past episodes of the show and just make sure that everything I put in my story belongs there. I never expected this to go on this long, but I'm actually enjoying it. And as long as my readers enjoy reading it then I will continue. It will end, I promise that, but I'm sure there will be more follow-up stories to this adventure. And more cliffhangers are on the way! ;)
Chapter 34: Illuminations: Chapter Nine

Summary: Sometimes the unlikely does occur. How you deal with it is up to you.

Categories: CSI - Slashed > Gil/Greg
Characters: Gil Grissom, Greg Sanders
Genres: Pre-slash, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3868; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Jun 2008; Published: 01 Jun 2008

Reviewer: lilyvonschtup (Signed)
02 Jun 2008

As usual -- great stuff. I'd kind of like to see how the relationship between Gil and Greg develops however. What would it take to bribe you into a sequel?

Author's Response: You just never know. Bribery is wonderful--it seldom works, but it\'s wonderful! *eg* Sometimes these little scenes keep talking to me, and if this one does, you\'ll see it here.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1