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Reviewer: Kristafied (Anonymous)
20 May 2006 02:35 pm


Ah. So beautiful.
Epilogue (Grissom)



Reviewer: chris mcc (Anonymous)
10 Jan 2006 03:48 pm


wow. just wow. that is an amazing story. thank you so much for sharing it
Epilogue (Grissom)



Reviewer: committed (Anonymous)
10 Aug 2005 08:18 pm


I just read your story for the first time. It was wonderful and so beautifully written. You got all the characters just right.
Epilogue (Grissom)



Reviewer: Tracy (Anonymous)
18 Jul 2005 10:58 am


Awesome Awesome Awesome!!! That was so amazing...Of course I'm sitting here crying at the end. Please keep up the great work!
Epilogue (Grissom)



Reviewer: CChemist (Anonymous)
18 Jul 2005 10:18 am


Very good - well written and good flow. You should submit to CSI - it would make a great show, even if they left out the "R" rated parts. Congratulations on an excellent piece of fanfic!
Epilogue (Grissom)



Reviewer: kirsten aka lj dirtyvirgin (Anonymous)
10 Jul 2005 02:41 am


i quite enjoyed this fic. i've always loved that fairytale, i received it as a child and i've been hooked ever since. your imagery is quite lovely throughout and i must always applaud someone who is able to balance the casefile with the personal asides. there were a couple of times where i got caught on something, perhaps a switch of pov, and had to reread it a couple times but on the whole i stayed glued to the computer moniter quite dedicatedly. :) i'm reading a new version of "east o'..." merely called "east" by edith pattou. she does interesting things with vignette pov switches that you may want to read. at any rate, lovely story.
Epilogue (Grissom)



Reviewer: Princess Artemis (Signed)
01 Jul 2005 04:59 am


Nice touch bringing Sam in! I like, I like. Will read more shortly...
Chapter Twenty-Seven (Catherine)



Reviewer: The AL (Anonymous)
26 Jun 2005 09:45 pm


Hey, I -like- the ambiguous ending. I'm proud to claim it as my brain child bits. Very nice job, I loved this from the beginning, and it really was a pleasure to beta. ^_^

Author's Response: Hehehe. Yes, you did quite push it. Thanks again for all your help!
Epilogue (Grissom)



Reviewer: big csi fan (Anonymous)
26 Jun 2005 05:30 pm


oh my god been away foe the weekend and had a lot to catch up on excellent chapeter i hope there is another story cause you are fantastic!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure there'll be more stories - as long as this one, I don't know.
Epilogue (Grissom)



Reviewer: Kitty (Anonymous)
26 Jun 2005 05:18 pm


*bawls* so beautiful. I can hardly type this... *bawls some more* absolutely prefect, complete and utter perfection. *grovels at your feet* I bow to the wonder of your superiority. wow. i think i need to go find the tissues...

Author's Response: Aaaw, thank you. *offers tissue*
Epilogue (Grissom)



Reviewer: Kitty (Anonymous)
26 Jun 2005 09:52 am


I knew it was coming, yet it still broke my heart to read it. So here i am typing through my tears to tell you... another brilliant chapter.
Chapter Thirty-Five (Sara)



Reviewer: Kitty (Anonymous)
25 Jun 2005 11:49 pm


i think i just fainted...yup, i did. soooo good! and yet you keep me here in slow agony waiting for each new chapter! gah! though i know it's not your fault and your beta is working very hard *hugs beta* i love her. anyways, great chapter, seemed foreboding...
Chapter Thirty-Four (Grissom)



Reviewer: Kitty (Anonymous)
23 Jun 2005 10:40 pm


squee! i can't even speak...just... squee! can't wait for the next one, as usual :P
Chapter Thirty-Three (Warrick)



Reviewer: big csi fan (Anonymous)
23 Jun 2005 12:04 pm


yet again amazing!!
Chapter Thirty-Three (Warrick)



Reviewer: big csi fan (Anonymous)
22 Jun 2005 05:37 pm


absolutly incredable
Chapter Thirty-Two (Alan)



Reviewer: Kitty (Anonymous)
22 Jun 2005 09:18 am


gah! oh. so. good! I can't wait to see what happens and the suspense is killing me. great way to end the chapter. I wonder whose POV is next. maybe cath's. anyways, simply incredible.
Chapter Thirty-Two (Alan)



Reviewer: rielhawk (Anonymous)
22 Jun 2005 03:20 am


I absolutely love this story. The prose is a bit strange for the style of CSI, but it is absolutely gorgeous. The dialogue itself and character behavior is, to my mind, spot on. I can't wait til the next chapter.

Author's Response: Ah, thank you. Yeah, it's definitely a particular style, slightly influenced by saga and fairytale styles. I don't know, the story just seemed to call for it.
Chapter Thirty-One (Catherine)



Reviewer: big csi fan (Anonymous)
21 Jun 2005 01:18 pm


amazing!! cant wait for the rest!
Chapter Thirty-One (Catherine)



Reviewer: Princess Artemis (Signed)
20 Jun 2005 09:35 pm


Very nice so far. Still have a bunch of catch-up to do :) Still liking the style, and seeing more of it at once makes it feel more appropriate; I suppose I must have just needed a while to get used to it. It does have the sense of being a somewhat somber and stately fairytale. Really liked how honest Warrick was, and Nick, too. Fortunately, don't have to wait for more, just until my brain can continue processing words.

Author's Response: :) Thank you - glad the style grew on you.
Chapter Twenty-Three (Catherine)



Reviewer: big csi fan (Anonymous)
20 Jun 2005 12:09 pm


another excellent chatper! just wondering when you have finished this story are you going to write one to say for example what happens after like between warrick and catherine and grissom and sara or are you leaving it at that?????

Author's Response: That is better question that you might suspect - I don't know, is the current answer. The ending does sort of keep a sequel open, but I'd have to get an idea I really liked first and feel I had a story to tell. We shall see...
Chapter Thirty (Grissom)



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