OMG, lol! I have to say, I totally thought this fic was in the wrong section when I went poking around for Lindsay/Mac fictions, but since the summary indicated Danny/Lindsay, I figured "Well, why not?" So, I'm reading along here, chill as can be, and get to the shower scene.

Because I'm that kind of person (^o^"), I took my time getting to the point where that scene ended. BUT! Lo and behold, all those moments that Danny's name could have been mentioned but wasn't had purpose! >:D

I have to say, the abrupt intro of Mac where I thought for sure Danny would be
Definately sent me in for a trip! XDDD Bravo! Brilliant stuff!

Ooo, this was a great idea! Stella in charge: very sexy! :P I loved Mac's surrender to a 'stranger'. Very hot. ^o-

uhhmm... i just have a question... did they make love in front of everybody? i mean did anyone see them? it'd be very exciting if yelina did...

Such a great story, very hot! Wonderfully written as well.

Awww... I just love this one! Don't ever stop writing! =)

Yes, off course... =) Don't sue me... But I had been thinkin' on the situation with Hagen, not remindin' that the story U wrote happened before that... :s

Really nice story, but seems to be like Calleigh's never been with a man before... Calleigh already was 31 when she joined Miami's Crime-team, so... :s

Author's Response: And at 37, a very good friend of mine is still a virgin, so it's a plausability.

A very nice story!

Fantastic story! I LOVE it!

Oh man! Tell me there is another chapter!

That was really quite a story! I do wonder what Mac was thinking the whole time. Did he know it was Lindsay? Psh, I'll bet he enjoyed it. ~Dalet

Really liked this. Can imagine Greg being right time's up.

Made me laugh but kept wondering how Danny would react if he found out. Was more worried about that then Lindsay losing her job.

Loved it......poor Lindsay. I could just see her face when Mac turned round...love to know what was going on in Mac's head in the shower..*g* As for Stella, I just loved her reaction with Mac in the elevator.... Great fun...

Wow. Just wow. I really liked this.

egad! that was sooo hot >:) genius! definetly one of my SMacked faves. unforgettable that's for sure. -mj(wgf)

brilliant

That was incredible! Excellent job!

Hooo my God! That was so hot. My God was that ever... yum! So awesome, this is my fave Mac/Stella story out there! :P Got any more ^_^

OMFG...I...err....*wibble*....errr.....*drool*....um.... God I adored this. HOT *fans self*.. *Takes deep breath and tries to form coherent thought* I hope you will right a sequel to this I would LOVE to know where Stella takes this next. Ohh the mind boggles...*sheesh....goes of to find a cold shower*

Author's Response: Either a subway or chocolate... haven't really given it much thought. Oouga/ Sam